19.12.16
Russia, Chelyabinsk.
Hello, my dear friend Ann. How are you?
I am writing for discussion your problem about new hobby your brother. Some sports could be dangerous, but you can speaking with you brother and ask your opinion about it. Furthermore he older than you and he doesnt upset your and parents.
But, this problem have minuses proses. For example you brother would be happy and will done favourite skills. He understand that your and parents believe and support him.
On the other hand this sports is very dangerous, but you dont worry only support.
In my country very popular basketball and swimming. Also some teenagers like extreme sport because they want be strong and attract for attention. My favourite sport is swimming.
Goodbye Ann see you later.
Dear Ann,
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I am writing to discuss your problem about new hobby of your brother. Some sports could be dangerous, but you can speak with your brother and ask his opinion about it. Furthermore he is older than you and he doesn't want to upset you and your parents.
But, this problem has minuses proses - что это?. For example your brother will be happy and will do what he likes. He understands that you and your parents support him.
On the other hand this sport is very dangerous, but you dont worry only support. - не связно, непонятная мысль
Basketball and swimming are very popular in my country. Also some teenagers like extreme sport, because they want to be strong and attract attention. My favourite sport is swimming.
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Write back soon,
Lisa
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