Semi formal letter(2)

Dear Mrs,

  I am writing to enquire about improve my language.

Firstly i d like to known where exactly it is? For example, is there a school i can take books pens and workbooks and how many people are there? Also could you tell me if there a english. I want improve and inrich my knowns! How are many days in week is english lessons? Could you tell me timetable. I like study English because English you need to known. Children must learn English wel. A lot of learn. For this you need have a good edication.

Secondly 

A semi- formal letter

Dear Mr John,
I m writing to enquire about staying at your campsite this summer.
Firstly I d like to known about when exactly it is, For example, is there a ship how many people are there? Also could you tell me if there in extra charge for a parking ship and wheather i can take my clothes and boots.
Secondly what is the type of accommodation? How many days we will live there? Also how does it cost? It's great that you're just a stones throw from the beach. However, your advert doesn't say which water sports are available. In adventure time I can will see mountains and forests. I am a particularly interested in doing windsurfing and would like to known if this is possible.

I hope you find this information helpful. 

Elizaveta Simonova.